Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Slayed - The Continuation

The assignment for my writing group this month was to continue the scene begun last month. Here is the continuation. If you'd like to read it from the beginning, click here.

WARNNG: There is aggressive language used throughout. If this bothers you click here.

(Note: Amelia is 15, Gordie is 16 and Bess is 9.)


BESS
(To GORDIE, smashing the ice pack to the
floor, standing)
Shut up you fucking' retard before I come over there
and beat the shit out of you and your little hot dog
again.

GORDIE
(Rising, rushing BESS)
You little mongoloid!

BESS gang rushes GORDIE. He grabs her by the arms
and picks her up. She kicks him in the thighs
over and over again, screaming "YOU FUCKING
RETARD." GORDIE rears back a hand to punch her in
the face when PRINCIPAL BRUCE swings the door to
his office open and lurches for the feuding
twosome.

PRINCIPAL BRUCE is a balding man in his
mid-forties, and terrified. He swats at them to
break it up - holding his face away to guard it
from impact.

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
Enough! E-NOUGH!

He shoves GORDIE to the floor and picks BESS up as
if she is made of razor blades. He tosses her in
the chair, swipes up the ice pack and hands it to
BESS without looking at her.

After a moment to compose himself:

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
I am very disappointed in you. Very disappointed. You
told me - no, promised - no more of this, this -
right. You made a promise. I can see now that your
promises mean nothing.

AMELIA snorts.

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
(Turning on her)
Now you lookahere, Miss Priss. You're not in here for nothing.
So, why don't you wipe that face off your face and -

A door opens and closes in the distance. There
are some official sounding mumblings from off.
Principle Bruce perks up and watches with
interest.

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
(Distant, looking off)
Now lets all settle down.

A moment as the offstage office equipment keens
softly.

After a beat, JAKE SPADE enters, late 30's,
attractive and no nonsense. Principal Bruce backs
up as he enters and takes charge of the room.

Amelia stands and runs into Jake's arms. Gordie
grabs the rip in his pants on instinct.

JAKE
Hi there, Peanut. Not now -
(To Principal Bruce)
Do you mind telling me what the hell is going on out here?
Are you out of your mind to drag me all the way out of
work? Can't this wait? Can't you send a note? You
think I'm made out of time, here?
(To Gordie)
What the fuck happened to your pants? Think I'm made out
of money, here? That's the third pair of pants in a
month, Gordie, Jesus.

GORDIE
It wasn't-

JAKE
Your fault. Uh-huh. I know. Never is.

GORDIE
But-

JAKE
Why don't you shut up and let the grown ups talk.
(To Principal Bruce)
So what is it? What is so of-the-essence that I have
to get my hands dirty?

Principal Bruce glances back at Bess. They all
turn to look at her. Bess is sitting and rocking
the force of her breath causing her to sway. Her
feral eyes glare at Jake.

A beat.

JAKE
The fuck is that?

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
Bess Hart, Mr. Spade. We had an...inci- incident
today. In the parking lot.

JAKE
And..?

PRINCIPAL BRUCE
As you can see, she's-

AMELIA
Gordie beat the shit out of her.

Jake turns to look at Amelia.

GORDIE
WHUT? Oh, come ON!

JAKE
What's that, Peanut?

AMELIA
Gordie did it. He beat her up.

GORDIE
You told me to.

AMELIA
I don't know what you're talking about.

GORDIE
Yeah, you DO, Amelia! You told me to. Wouldn't leave
me alone.

AMELIA
Well, if you weren't being such a pussy-

GORDIE
Watcher mouth, Amelia!

JAKE
ENOUGH.
(All fall silent)
Gordie, I don't want to hear another WORD OUT OF YOUR MOUTH.
(To Principal Bruce, who is about to fall apart himself)
What can we do here? What is this - what? What can we do
here?

From off there is more official mumbling. After a moment,
KAY and PATRICK HART enter. They are in their
late 30's both are worn completely out. They stop
short when they enter. Kay surveys the scene.
Patrick looks at Jake.

PATRICK
Jake.

JAKE
Pat. Kay.

KAY
Jake. Principal Bruce.

Patrick breezes past everyone and into the
Principal's office. Kay makes a b-line for Bess and
sits next to her. They look at each other for a
moment, Kay pushes Bess' matted hair from her
eyes. Kay's presence calms Bess and she smiles up
at her mother.

KAY
(with reserve)
Who did this?

Everyone looks at Gordie.

GORDIE
WHUT?! Oh, Come ON.

JAKE
(Placing Amelia back in her chair)
Wait out here, Peanut.
(grasping Gordie's arm)
You get in here, now.

Principal Bruce scurries into his office and Kay
stands to follow. Bess waits. Everyone but
Amelia and Bess move off to the office.

AMELIA
(Standing)
I'm not staying out here with her!

JAKE
(from off)
You stay put, Peanut.

AMELIA
Are you crazy?

JAKE
I mean it! Or no credit card for a week. Sit tight.

The door closes and Amelia and Bess are left out
in the office lobby. Silence.

Muffled conversation can occasionally be heard
through the office door. The volume might raise
and lower as the scene progresses.

A long beat.

Bess stands, black eye covered in the ice pack
and points her gaze at Amelia. Amelia stairs at
the end of her shoe.

Bess takes a slow step towards Amelia.

Amelia hums tunelessly.

Bess takes a second step.

Amelia sniffs.

Bess takes a third step.

AMELIA
One more inch towards me and I'll do worse to you than
my retard brother ever could.

A beat.

Bess takes a fourth step.

Amelia jerks her head up to look at Bess.

AMELIA
You better not.

BESS
Already did. You're a cuntless wonder.

1 comment:

S. E. Johnson said...

First, I want to see this play out further.

Then, I want to see it live, and on stage.

Sassify my wishes!

 
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